Hey....this is a really good poem. But you have to stay strong..I know it's hard, believe me! It really is...but that is the only thing you can do. And if you ever wanna talk to someone about it just e-mail me, I'd be happy to talk about it with you!...Good poem 5/5!!

Hey there. u dont no me i dont no but ur poem is really sad and just one thing is u hav be strong through this hun u can make just belive in urself believe in a better place that u can make. if u cant talk to your family or friends u have a random friend on a poem site who is here for you. ur not a srew up. nice poems tho keep up the awesome work.
marnie xoxo

I loved your poem. it's very sad and made me think. i love the way you wroted it and the words you used. xoxo.