Wow hun that was beautiful. really good poem. loving the truth and deepful things said. keep up the awesome work. 10/10 from me.
marnz xoxo

That was an amazing poem. I know how you feel. Hang in there and keep up the good work!

The question at the end of this is so symbolic of the question in the narrative of the girl you are portraying. it really ends the poem off right. good job!