Comments : Grey Pathways

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Magnificent stuff... The flow is impeccable and the rhyming makes the read so pleasurable. Your words spell out confusion. I really enjoyed this piece, it's how I feel in the morning a really wonderful write :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Attimes I feel the way you have desribed in your poem.
    Very interesting topic and a very enjoyable read!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Kim this was a really good poem. It was short and sweet.

    Have a good time with Migzz, bring him back home in one piece : P