Wow this was refreshingly non-materialistic
"'cause money cant buy happiness
despite popular belief"
That was alos very true, the amount of people who just spend money for a good time is just...pfft...I love the attitude in this song, I can almost hear it on the radio now
You may wanna clear up some of the "i"s that are like "i'll" and make them capitals because its a bit incosistent
Great read :D

I think it was great blunt raw honest very good job!