Flushed

by The Poetic Child   Apr 27, 2006


Your face was so Bright
What i had was so True
Hanging In the Night
I truly loved you

But you didn't feel nothing
I was just a part of your life
Nothing thats important
Heres my Heart, Theres the Knife

You've cut me wide open
you've used me like a tool
Just to use until your done
Look..Now I'm your fool

Endless nights i just think
Think about what we had
Every-time my heart shrinks
One more Ounce of being sad

How could you just leave me
How could you just break me
you just couldn't even believe me
All you could do was take me

You didn't believe my love was true
You believed that i was just your boy
You never meant it..When u say I love you
I'm just another collection for all your play toys

My heart is being abused
My heart is now Crushed
My heart was Refused
MY heart is now....FLUSHED..

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Nice ryhme..ruthem a bit off but i thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

    :) Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    Such a great poem! soo sad, but very beautiful and expressive, I love it

  • 18 years ago

    by iicansaveyou.

    Aw....I'm in the same situation you are in. Cept I'm the girl that he left. And for you you're the boy that she left. I cry all the time and I write all the time. I'm gonna take a day or two to post the 110 poems that I've written after 4 months. I've kept myself inside and I can't go on. I'm there and I can't make myself go through. I hope everything works out for you. && if you ever need advice..comment me on one of my poems and I'll comment with advice back.

    This poem was also heartstopping. Buddy..you write sooo good. Become a writer and you'll defffff go far.

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Ouch is that bout mike? his not worth it gal.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Yet Again A Wonderful Poem...Your Poems Feel So Real...Pure Talent I Suppose...Keep It Up...And I Hope To See More Of You Poems Soon
    Take Care...
    Love,
    The Bell...:]

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