Hey. I saw your post in the members message forum and I'm not quite sure why you don't like your writes. I for one really enjoyed it, and it's rhyme scheme. I've found that the more poems I read the worse the rhyme scheme seems to be held up - but this was great! I like the structure and the meaning of this poem aswell. Actually, oddly enough when I was writing the other night the same title came into my mind, I just didn't know where to go with it. Now I know lol, but trust me I won't plagarize - I don't understand why people do that anyway. I just wanted to let you know that the way you portrade it was great, and I couldn't have done it any better myself. Take some pride in your work! I hope to see more of you! See 'round the site I hope :). -Stefhy

Hey! You have won the third place in my contest with this poem! Congrats. I chose this poem as one of the winners because I love the way it is written and what its about!

Excellent!

Love,
Line

Excellent poem. I thought it was good and well written. Congratulations on winning the contest, you really seem to have the potential, and are just the right person for the spot. Keep up your good work, I'm loving every poem more than the one I read before it. 5/5

Great symbolisem in this poem it painted a good picture in my mind, good work really.. keep it up! i know people always say that but you should i stoped writing for a while and i got outta my usually flow lol odd as that sounds anyway great poem!
Mollie

You are a guy and you were a cuttter? Wow, that brings back memories. My ex. boyfriend was a cutter, so in that one way, even though I don't know you, I can feel for you because I know what it was like to watch him deal with such pain. I was a cutter too, it was my fault. I have always wondered how guys do it, always act so strong and don't cry much. I would go insane, but wait, I already am. I could relate a lot to this poem, because it works well to tell a bit of my life story. It is hard to get a life back once you took up the knife, and even harder to get back is the love and trust of the people that matter in your life. Best of luck to you, may you be more successful than I have been.

-Tainted

The last staza was funny..although im not sure if it was meant to be humorous...good job!!
5/5

This is really good. I could relate to it. The flow & rhyme scheme were great & really helped bring out the emotion in the poem. Really great job! 5/5**

Marvelous poem... way different than everything I'd read on here so far.
Keep on writing!
5/5

Wonderful poem. It won you 3rd place. Congrads. You deserved it. Keep writing

-ifihide

This is so cool!