Broken-Hearted Fools & Suckers

by aDORKable x3   Apr 28, 2006


These feelings just keep bottling up inside
With no where to run, no where to hide
I try to ignore them, but I don't know why
I can't stop thinking about it and then I cry
This feeling is burning a hole in my heart
At just the mere thought of us being apart
We've been together so long, over 5 months in fact
I've looked on at the future, I don't want to look back
Through trouble and hard times we both have been
Together, forever; through thick and thin
We both don't want to be broken-hearted fools
Just think of how different it would be in school
Through tear-drops and heartaches we've been through them all
You were always the one to catch me whenever I fall
Sure we had our differences, laden in the past
But that makes us stronger, making out love last
Thinking about our relationship any other way
Is just too hard to bear at the very thought today
As I sit here writing this, tears swell in my eyes
I hope that you see this and maybe then you'll realize
I've commited ther perfect, flawless crime
I stole your heart when you stole mine
As i sit here holding it in my hands
I hope just one day you'll finally understand
The pieces that are missing will never be there
But with my bruised and tattered heart, I know that you still care

**don't worry, everything is alright...**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Making out love last-I think you meant our love last.

    Apart from that...I frikken LOVE this!
    I found this to be very intense, there was so much depth and emotion screaming through the words and the ending was so beautifully written, very sad and yet such a pleasure to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful emotion penned, flowed well yet beautiful expressive emotions, keep writing, and thanks for your nice comment, much appreciated, take care.

    bert.

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I liked the flow of this poem! I really fancied some of the lines in there. Great job. Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Ohhhh this poem is HOTT
    Sad
    But it was Said very well
    and your rhyme was Great.
    Great job
    keep it up
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~