by Ashley Van Eperen Apr 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
If its only for one moment... |
Wow... i can totally relate to this poem.. it like describes my last relationship perfectly. It was beautiful!! |
by MiSsEdHeArT
WOW! I love this poem! It is so good! A lot of emotion! Thanx for commenting on my poem! 5/5 hehe |
by Tara Kay
I liked that, it was emotional which is what i like about poems, i couldnt se anything wrong with it, and it was of a good length. |
by Jessica
Aww.. we all feel like that when we lose someone hun.. this was very emotional, it flowed well, and i couldn't see any errors! great job! excellent write! 5/5 |
by Bridgette
Wow that was a very emotional poem and I could definitely relate to it. You did a great job on this, it sounds like it came straight from your heart, which makes the best poems in my opinion. The flow of it was really good and it was easy to read which helped keep the focus on the emotions. Great job on this! |