Locked Up...[edited]

You watch me cry myself to sleep
Im not a piece of art at the show
So why am I here
please tell me as I do not know

Put me in this place to get well
Instead its making me a little worse
People treating me like a child
Im sick of this annoying nurse

Im fine its just a few scratches
I promise Ill stop just let me out of here
I scream at the nurse
as my eyes start to tear

Whoops shouldnt have said that
Now they think Im losing control
They are going to make me stay here now
Keep me longer in this hole

They stick me here and stop me from doing anything
I cant read I cant write I cant express myself
This place they have put me in
is the perfect explanation of my living hell

They keep me here until my scars have healed
I confess my secrets and I am saved
My future is what they must change
Everything I do after this they have paved

Making sure I never go back
To all the naughty things I did
Cant they see this isnt the way
Im just a little kid

Ill lie here in bed till they let me out
I wont do anything they say
So they can make room for another patient
And they will send me home today

plz comment ...which one is better the edited or original?...XoX thanx