Nana Lil

by gemowski   Apr 28, 2006


Today is the hardest day of my life,
i must say goodbye, but it burns inside.
i feel like i wanna sit and cry, as the feeling burns more and more inside.

you were so special to me,
I'm your great granddaughter,
the first of many,

many a times we've giggled with joy and you brought me my favorite ever toy.

oh great Nana Lil your now safe and sound,
although your feet don't touch the ground,
i still see and hear you all around.

there's a special place just for you tucked away from the sad and blue,
this special place in my heart which no one can ever tear apart.

and now i know that you are safe,
i sleep peacefully in my own little place.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oh great Nana Lil your now safe and sound,
    although your feet don't touch the ground,
    i still see and hear you all around.
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    I loved that stanza. It was really good. And the poem overall was brillant aswell. It was really touching, And I could understand the emotions. Keep up the great work! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    An emotional write, it's very hard to let someone go and you wrote about this well. I liked the first two lines, the description of the burning feeling inside was good, and very true.
    Just some corrections: you have "tare" it's spelt "tear."
    On the second to last line it should be "and."
    Well done, touching write.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Brilliant poem!!! Well writte!! Your emotion was expressed very well!!! Loved it 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Another brilliant poem
    5/5
    very well written so perfect & full of depth
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Cherri

    Much better, i enjoied reading this peice, i could feel your emotion so well, you expressed it vivdly. Great and Masterful work hun... ^_^

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