My dear sweet Nan

by gemowski   Apr 28, 2006


It was so hard seeing you there, ever so thin with not much hair.

at first i did not believe it was you,
your chubby face now thin and blue.

At first i had to walk away to take a breath, and think what to say.

but you looked so peaceful lying the, still looking at you i just couldn't bare.

my poor little Nana so skinny and frail, you could hardly lift a nail.

I'll still never know if you knew it was me, sat beside you that very last day.

an if I'd known it would be the last i would of spoke about blasts from the past.

but now i know your still with me every moment of every day.

and you are safe no more pain.
And I've lernt that life's one big hard game.

rest in peace my dear sweet Nan for i now know that one day we'll meet again.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw, This was sad. I'm really sorry for your loss if this is true.

    Brillant poem though, It flowed beautifuly and had so much meaning to it. Awesome job! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. are you alrite? you poor sweetheart.. very good poem, it almost made me cry..keep up the wonderful work and keep your chin up!
    lotsa love!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Awsome write!! Filled with lots of emotion!! Loved it!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Awsome write!! Filled with lots of emotion!! Loved it!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    Aweh this is so sad it made me cry

    but you looked so peaceful lying the, still looking at you i just couldn't bare.

    theres a mistake in that stanza with the the part it doesnt end or w/e

    but um i liked this

    its really good 5/5 good flow.

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