Life after you..

by Yasmine   Apr 28, 2006


Lifeless life..
life of a taste,
Tasteless taste.
skies of hopes..
Hopeless hopes..
Hearts wander around..
Homeless hearts..
Bouquets of flowers..
Colorless flowers.
Butterflies of joy..
Joyless joy.
Faces smile,
Smileless smiles.
Eyes stare,
Rayless stares..
Light of no light,
Lightless light..
Candles of love,
Flameless candles,,
Nights of dreams..
Dreamless dreams.
Listless souls,
Mourning your life,
life of endless pain,
Pain of endless loss,,
loss of priceless life,
your life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Xcite

    I like this a lot. It's very deep. I like how everything links together. Good job.
    Thanks for the comment on my poem as well.
    ~xoxo, mE

  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Dear precious Yasmine,,I feel a very deep agony laying behinde your verse.
    sad and deep..I like your use of words and adjectives...
    glad you wrote again...
    whish to see u next sat.

    5555555555555/5
    keep the good job up along with PCRssssssss ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    IT's good,but u could have done it better than that..u've a nice talent and i like ur way in general..

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