IT's good,but u could have done it better than that..u've a nice talent and i like ur way in general..

Dear precious Yasmine,,I feel a very deep agony laying behinde your verse.
sad and deep..I like your use of words and adjectives...
glad you wrote again...
whish to see u next sat.

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keep the good job up along with PCRssssssss ;)

I like this a lot. It's very deep. I like how everything links together. Good job.
Thanks for the comment on my poem as well.
~xoxo, mE