No Longer Can She Cry

by Sole   Apr 28, 2006


His clammy fingers touch her pure complexion
His putrid breath, stains her perfection
His uncaring eyes see her rejection
No longer can she cry

His repulsive voice as he whispers in her ear
His vivid tale fills her thoughts with fear
His heavy grip pulls her shaking body near
No longer can she cry

His torturous acts have lasted far too long
His evil gestures no longer seem so wrong
His scarring image will never be gone
No longer can she cry

His sinful smile, clouding her vision
His hateful stare, his mindless derision
His laughter as he makes a lifelong incision
No longer can she cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    ='(
    Can relate.
    Good job writing this hun.
    You have been on my favorites ever since I first signed on this site.
    Awesome job on this.
    The rhyming was excellent.
    And so was the flow.

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really deep and powerfull! nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Breathtaking, what else can I say?! Really held me from the off, you really know how to grab a reader's attention and thats a real art. As always you start strong and finish strong, your use of repetition gives the poem much more power, a truely gruesome poem. Makes me want to shudder! 5/5 x

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem just blew me away. I love the repetition of the last line in every stanza.. It gives it an even sadder touch. It was very descriptive & it flowed well.. great job! 5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel Mulvany

    His evil gestures no longer seem so wrong. That line kind of threw me off. It didn't seem to match the statement of the poem. Other than that, it was good. Keep writing.

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