I thought it was really deep, but some parts of it seemed forced. I really liked it though, keep writting!

Stunning and severely underrated! The use of language was quite simply worth 5/5 all by itself but the rhyme and flow were equally exquisitely crafted and displayed an obvious talent. I think perhaps the poem may have been percieved as such because for many people the content will have gone over their heads, but I certainly wouldn't suggest tailoring your writing for a larger audience, this was amazing stuff, keep writing! 5/5 x

*pulls out dictionary* Your vocab really is strong and the word choice was just beautiful. I think the vocab might be hard for some people but I wouldn't suggest changing it because then it'll become another regular poem and this one stands out as is.

Wow- I felt your words- and that's what poetry is- words being energy- your amazing dude.

Another awesome job! I loved the question you used; "What is love?" Although, You went through a number of things. Maybe you could add to it, Say love is only a cause of pain and heartbreak, Or lust. This poem just could really go on forever. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

"So placid and phlegmatic."
I would not describe love as phelgmatic.. that's almost a complete contradiction. phelgmatic either means relating to phelgm, which is gross, or calm in such a way that is unemotional. Love is an emotional. To have a phelgmatic love is to not be loving at all. That was a confusing and bad word to use.
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Beyond that, I enjoyed the images and vocabulary, along with the thoughts about love that came with them.