Silent Good Bye

by The Lady Jupiter   Apr 28, 2006


The field is empty
The sound of birds is no more
The grass is silent

A single tear falls
Over the Silent Body
Even the clouds cry

Your pain is now gone
My pain is just beginning
My tears fall softly

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  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    I thought this was a pretty good poem. I liked the imagery you used, it gave the poem more emotion.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    Very good!! I love this poem, the atmosphere, and how it makes you feel. Your doing well, keep it up and NEVER stop writing, you have some great talent right there. That has literally been one of the best poems I have ever read. 5/5 from me.
    -Hayley-

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