Dear Terra...

by Gaberial   Apr 28, 2006


In my heart,
you are the north star.

I will go with you,

No matter how far.

Youre the one,

Who comforts my soul.

The only one,

Who makes me whole.

In my heart,

You are the black rose.

I will admire your beauity,

And my love only grows.

Youre the one,

Put here for me.

My loves in the open,

For all to see

I love you with all my heart and so

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  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This was really cute i loved it yeah i love to read love poems my favorite type and this one made me smile xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I like the title and the third stanza. Otherwise, I'd NOT space it out like that, and I'd add more stanzas that have some specifics on why you care about the girl, not just general hints at your emotions and whatnot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Evil love

    That is really sweet well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww this was really sweet =] Short but sweet tehe. Keep it up! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    I liked the transitions, it made the flow perfect, 5/5

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