Awww. i thought this was so cute.. your a great writter i especially like this stanza

Youre the one,

Who comforts my soul.

The only one,

Who makes me whole.

and i really like the first one to.. and the third and so i just like the whole thing i guess great job 5/5 once again

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

You'll probably notice my comments are different, but hopefully helpfuul. I think you mean soul in the last sentence. Probably a typo. Now when writing a love poem (I don't know much about them) I think you should want to express the emotion rather than the words. Maybe describe one thing more than a couple and go into how it makes you feel and that should carry it across the poem to your reader. It's good as is but I think you could stand out if you wrote more from the heart and soul then the mind.
Good luck in writing.

As Kaylee said I think you should show more emotion in this one. But overall I thought it was really good.

Another wonderfully expressive write that shows a great deal of ability. This is a great love poem and the use of more simplistic terms makes it much more accessible and thus comes across as a much lighter piece that suits the underlying expression wonderfully. A joy to read, 5/5 x

I liked the transitions, it made the flow perfect, 5/5

Aww this was really sweet =] Short but sweet tehe. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

That is really sweet well done 5/5

I like the title and the third stanza. Otherwise, I'd NOT space it out like that, and I'd add more stanzas that have some specifics on why you care about the girl, not just general hints at your emotions and whatnot.

This was really cute i loved it yeah i love to read love poems my favorite type and this one made me smile xxALLYxx