I actually really did like this poem. I like how you state one line with and about the rose and then continue more about it for only one line after before begining another idea. Not to mention the last line stood out as really powerful.

One suggestion is maybe limit words as some of them could be taken out with no problem such as:

Steeped on and trampled by the wicked animals.

Could be

Stepped on and trambled by wicked animals.

This poem was very deep. I really liked it. These were my favorite lines:
The rose, whithering into nothing.
The last petal drops.
The rose falls...
I think you are very talented.

The way that you refer to the rose alternately gives the poem a really fragmented feel and helps to create a disjointed affect which helps to emphasise the darkness that this write displays. The use of the rose was very well recieved and it's ultimate death was a very fitting end to the poem; drawing it to a satisfying conclusion. 5/5 x

This is my favorite from you so far, wow, I'm seriously at a lost for words, 5/5, thats amazing, so powerful but short

This was cool, Not as good as your others, But I still liked it. Keep writing =]

`taleee xx

This was a really good poem. Very dark, with lots of horrific images. I would have to agree with Kaylee on this one, with the suggestion she pointed out. Good stuff though man.

Very dark, you are a very talented writer 5/5

Good poem. I liked the repitition and the details. This doesn't have to be a dark poem, it could be a poem about sadness and depression, the rose being a person/you and the other objects/things being different aspects of life that trample the rose into nothingness. Just a bit of symbolism to think about.