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by Gaberial   Apr 28, 2006


Sitting in the silence,
thinking of you.
Face etched into my mind,
if only you knew.

How can I tell you,
so you will not hide?
I need to let it out,
cause its boiling up inside.

Will it matter to you,
what I feel?
Even if it doesn't,
I will love you still.

I only know,
what I wish you would do.
And that is to say,
I love you too.

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  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Another great poem simple form but its effective loved the first stanzaxxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "cause its boiling up inside."
    it's needs an apostrophe.
    ~~~
    Like I said for one of the other love poems, this lacks specificity. The only parts that I'd consider personal are the first stanza and maybe the last line of the second. Besides that, it is a basic unrequited love poem, without even any mention of what the girl is like... her hair or eyes or anything that makes her special an unique or anything about you that would make you unique too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Evil love

    Another great poem! well done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. i can SO relate to that poem.. that was so sweet and actually brought a tear to my eye as it felt like you were telling my story.. excellent work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by gemowski

    This again is a great piece of poetry really gud work hun

    keep it up

    gema xoxox

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