Wow.. I really like your writting style and im still suprised you dont have more comments.. this was a nice poem again 5/5

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~!*Meaghen~!*

I really think you could take out some of those words you don't really need. Your ideas are good but you should try, if you wanted to, to limit the words and focus more of getting the point across and carrying the message if you really want to stand out (such as your rose poem did):

Sitting in the silence,
thinking of you.

could be:

Sitting in silence,
Thinking of you

Great job. I can definitely relate to this. It makes me sad.. :( .. just stay strong. You did a great job on this. The flow on it was amazingly perfect. Great job! 5/5*

This was really good. It had a lot of emotion in it. My favorite stanza was :
Will it matter to you,
what I feel?
Even if it doesn't,
I will love you still.

A touching description of unrequited love. Very heartfelt, a very evocative poem.
"Sitting in the silence,
thinking of you.
Face etched into my mind,
if only you knew."
A powerful opener. 5/5 x

Awww.... it's innocent love, it's that first love, it reminds me of- falling for someone and not being sure if they feel the same, is what i get from reading this piece.

Another sad but nice poem. I really like how you said;
"Will it matter to you,
what I feel?
Even if it doesn't,
I will love you still."

That was sweeeeet, And totaly adorable! Awesome job! 5/5

`taleeee xx

This again is a great piece of poetry really gud work hun

keep it up

gema xoxox

Awww.. i can SO relate to that poem.. that was so sweet and actually brought a tear to my eye as it felt like you were telling my story.. excellent work! 5/5

Another great poem! well done! 5/5

"cause its boiling up inside."
it's needs an apostrophe.
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Like I said for one of the other love poems, this lacks specificity. The only parts that I'd consider personal are the first stanza and maybe the last line of the second. Besides that, it is a basic unrequited love poem, without even any mention of what the girl is like... her hair or eyes or anything that makes her special an unique or anything about you that would make you unique too.

Another great poem simple form but its effective loved the first stanzaxxALLYxx