by Gaberial Apr 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Wipe away the tears, |
by holly
Lovely poem, great rhymes. nice thoughts and effective ending xxALLYxx |
by Sean Allen
"Too bad its a dream," |
by Evil love
Well even thought this one wasn't a dream for you in reality you made it a dream in the poem, still good though 5/5 from me |
by Jessica
Awww.. again, i can soo relate.. seems like we're both in the same position.. very in love with someone that doesn't love us.. lol.. excellent poem, lots of emotion and a great flow! 5/5 |
by gemowski
WOW im really feelin this poem i can relate to it so much really good work hun nothing bad to say about this one |