I love this poem. Keep writing. 5/5 from me.
Hayley

Great job.. im suprised you dont have more votes or comments 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I really don't like when people write the usual comments because it seems like they don't actually read the poem (Maybe they do but they could write a bit more about it.) so here's what I thought:

The title was pretty good. It felt like it carried a lot of disappointment.
The concept was good to but you really want to make it stand out as love poems tend to always fall in the same pattern and word choice.

Give you my heart,
and sing you a song

I don't know whether you should keep that but it just seems better to write:

Gave you my heart
And sang you a song.

This is really good! it flowed very nicely & had some strong emotions of love in it. Great job! 5/5**

I really loved it! I loved the rhyming and the flow if it. Very nicely done! 5/5

Another heart wrenching description of feelings unrequited. I really liked this piece, drenched in sheer emotion, conveyed so strongly. Great stuff. 5/5 x

I liked the poem- it was so traditional and beautiful, and the end surprised me also.

This was a really sad but nice poem. Loved this part; "You are the one,
with the only key." Really great job! Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

WOW im really feelin this poem i can relate to it so much really good work hun nothing bad to say about this one

gema xoxoxo

Awww.. again, i can soo relate.. seems like we're both in the same position.. very in love with someone that doesn't love us.. lol.. excellent poem, lots of emotion and a great flow! 5/5

Well even thought this one wasn't a dream for you in reality you made it a dream in the poem, still good though 5/5 from me

"Too bad its a dream,"
it's needs an apostrophe, it's a contraction
~~~
Your first stanza was the only one with any sort of personalized detail, and it didn't have much of that either. I think that when it comes to this sort of love poem, if it doesn't have something that makes it yours, then it belongs to the world of cliche. Next time you write a love poem, think about specifics, or moments, or something that makes you think that it's a memory that is yours, not one that is so general and abstract that the whole world could have written the same general feeling down. Unless you're shooting for a great fundamental truth (in that case generalizations are fine), I'd go specifc.

Lovely poem, great rhymes. nice thoughts and effective ending xxALLYxx