Wow! I can relate to this so well. Maybe that's why it seems so good. I don't know what to say. You have a great variety of rhyming words, and a great plot to the poem. Even if you don't know what the plot is, it's there, and I can tell what it is. Keep up the great work, never be afraid to let your feelings show...ever. 5/5 from me!
-Hayley-

Gr8, no wot u mean 5/5
x leanne x

Fantastic poem, very sad but much truth in it. A lot of people will relate to this. Your rhyme well, seemingly without forcing it which is enjoyable. Keep up the good work x

Wow this is so true!! So many people can relate to this. It's really good.. The flow & the rhythm in it was great & I love the way that you worded it! Great job!! 5/5***

Wow, I can totally relate to this poem. Well written and gripping. Enjoyed it fully... 5/5

This is a very understandable poem you've got good writing skills,
top marks.

gema 20 in cheshire

xoxoxox

Thanks for the comments!

This poem can relate to alot of people. I loved alot of the lines in there because they seemed so true at heart. Great job! Keep writing.

B-e-a-u-tiful. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!! I know what you mean. stay strong ok? take care
Much love

It was a very real poem, i can relate somehow and im sure lots of other people can to...great job and thanx for the comment...5/5

Its like you take all my feelings and emotions and write about them for me...love it

Exellent work. i really enjoyed reading tha, as it is somthing i can realte to, and it was so well written and easy to read.

i wouldnt change a thing

Ruby

Great Work!! You did a wonderful job!!! Its something i can relate to!! Excellent!! 5/5!!

This one i like alot, it's very well done, keep on writing like that
:)

Deep and touching i could relate to every word well writen 5/5

Hmm...very true. Loved it.

joy*:.xx

Loved it! everything about it was perfect--- 5/5

So true. I live life like this everyday. Pretending to be happy when there's nothing left to live for.

Beautiful!!! I loved this because it was so true! Every word you said was powerful in true meaning and I know everyone can relate to this brilliant work. I live life like this often, and I couldn't have said things better. Thank you for your comment on my poem, it was very much appreciated! Keep up your great work! 5/5

I tend to be the same way, faking a smile alot. I just don't like bringing people down. I think it's bad though, that I bottle everything up. Really good poem, I connected with this one.

Wow, I know how it feels! It was sad, but it's true. Good job though. I liked it. Keep writting!