Thx a lot 4 commenting it meant a lot. 5/5 excellent poem.

It was a little rhyme schemed, but it worked with the poem. This is a great poem because a lot of people can relate to it and you just have that writer to reader connection. I personally liked the last stanza the best... Great Job!

I really like this poem cuz it relates to me so much i do this each and every day and no one else sees the real me or wats inside at that

Ooh, this was awesome! I love love love the last line, "this is how you fake a life", i mean, that was just GREAT.
amazing job with this!

-Parker

I love it Cayce...
lots and lots of people can relate... espessialy people around our age.. lots of people fake their life... so for me this was a great poem 5/5
**Monica**

This one is wonderful! my favorite out of all of yours yet! i have one suggestion though

Never let them *truly, or really* see
Just fake a person they want you to be
Faking smiles and telling lies
This is how you fake a life.

maybe add one of them words or one of ur choice, and i think that it flows better. You don't have to if you don't like it, its just my opinion. but you did a great job on this one! im sure that everyone can relate! keep it up! :]

Another fabby-tastic one! I love the kind of "how-to" style. Simplistic yet really effective and exactly what so many people (if not everyone) does from time to time. 5/5

Em xXx

This is a good poem..not your best though... i expected more out of the ending... but i still liked it.. the flow was good and everything so i still give you a 5/5

Short, great flow, beautifully written, love the word choice, and I love you :P

5/5 to my new found love off of the "any one you choose" poem :P haha

I can relate to this, becuase i know how it is to fake a smile..its sad, because everyone thikns your fine..and they dont know you are faking a smile..

anyway, great poem.

Wow this is powerful... very very nice job!.. ive written a few poems just like this myself so i can relate.. NICE JOB! keep it up and thanks for the comments =)

A really great poem!
lookes a little bit of my
feelings sometimes

5/5

This is a great poem. I can really relate to it. I could never write something this beautiful! So, great job!!

This poem caught my attention. I love the rhythm, good JoB! 5/5

What the... I should smack you! xD
Scar me, my butt. You take a cliche concept -- EXTREMELY cliche topic, might I emphasize -- and you end it in a way I've never read before. EVER.

Your old work is haunting; that goes past simply having emotion, love :) and at least you only misspelled one word. "truly" -- while the piece you commented, I had like three "your"s when it was supposed to be "you're" LOL .

Much better than mine ! ;D
Case closed. No questions asked. Yup.
..__MiNDYY

O.O
m'ks. so i decided i wanted to read the first poem you ever posted up here ((or at least the first that's on your list..)) because i'm weird like that and it's what i do. lol. so here is MY review. ^.^

First off, this actually is pretty good. I don't like the rhyming scheme, but that's because it's just my preference to rhyme every other line instead of how you have it. but again, that's just preference.

Never let them truely see
Just fake a person they want you to be
Faking smiles and telling lies
This is how you fake a life.

^^ the last line in this was breath taking ((if off the meter...lol.)). it needs mas punctuation, but whateversss...i really like how you tied it all together in this stanza.

the poem was short, but it had a good point to it.

plussss...it's really cool, seeing where you kind of started and how much you've improved ((you have improved a ton from what i've read)). good job, missy. ^.^