Watching you love someone else

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   Apr 28, 2006


While I dreamt of you
You gazed at her
While I cried alone
You wiped her tears

While I stumbled
And hurt inside
You held her up
And stayed by her side

and while I fell
You caught her fall
While you gave her everything
I lost it all

And while I sit here lonely
And continuously cry
You keep her alive
And leave me to die

Because while you love her
With all of your heart
My loves goes unnoticed
And tears me apart

Because no matter what I do
It's only her you'll ever see
There will never come a day
You'll turn around and love me

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  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is really deep! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni Ann

    Oh that is so sad. I almost cried. I think that you write really emotionly touching poems and I think that you should keep it up. Wish you lots of luck.
    ~Toni Ann~

  • 18 years ago

    by xxxNecaFamousxxx

    OMG! This is such a good poem! I could never write like that...you are one of my favorite writers on this website you are way good at writing this one almost made me cry! I hope that you keep up all the good poems and never stop writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    I HAVENT BEEN ON DiS SiTE iN MONTHS & DiS POEM iS THE FiRST WUN i'VE READ & i MUST SAY "i LOVE DiS POEM." bUT iM NOT SURPRiSED, i'VE ALWAYS REMEBERED DAT i LOVED ALL UR POEMS CUZ U'RE SUCH A GREAT WRITER SO KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL JOB!

    Na-Na

  • 18 years ago

    by Yamanaka Vic

    I know how you feel, theres this guy at my school, who loves another, and all I can do is sit alone, and do nothing.

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