Wow.... you basicaly described how i feel right now.
good job.

Wow.. loved it..

I loved your poem :) probably because i have been in that same situation :( your poem was great keep it up :)

This is wonderful
i love your writing
5/5

--Jasmyn

Hey excellent poem captures the heartbreak and sorrow perfectly well written as well

I know how that feels, its the worst feeling in the world. when the only person that can stop you from crying is the one who made u cry. love the poem:)

That's exactly how i feel...i know it hurts a lot. Really good poem xxxxx

I love this poem it is great and it is such a shame that people are so cold hearted these days.

Awww! i so sorry i hope u feel better! there is someone out there for u! u wil find them soon and they will love u! jus to let u know if u think no one loves u, u are wrong...cuz i love u lol

Wow. I really like this poem. All that it describes is so true. I'm sure many can relate to such a great poem, I know that I can. The thing that makes this poem, and any poem, so great, is that passion that you put behind it. In order to write great things, you must write things you know, and you have deffinetly accomplished that fact. I loved the poem, keep up with the great work. You are truly talented!!! I'm adding you to my favorites, and I look forward to seeing more great things from you!
With Much Love,
~*mags*~

Omg! that was soooo beautiful yet very sad! I wish you the best of luck! great job!
xOxAmandaxOx

5/5 it was really good keep it up i know how you feel i feel it everyday it sucks love sucks ttyl

This is sad i am sorry you have to go through this keep your head up 5.5

DAmn this poem is so damn good
u seema goosd writer I give u props

Watching you love someone else made me feel somthing, allmost like i wanted to cry caus it`s such a sad story. i loved it anyways

Wow. i wish i had a better word for it. I'd hate to be in that position. Great Job.

Wow i like it... 5/5 good job

I really love your poem. I can understand the pain because if my boyfriend and I borke up and I seen him with somone else errrr i would hurt her hehe j/k but good poem 5/5 for me
xoxoxox
Jess

Hey..dis poem is soo touching..it's just like mine..i luved a guy but he loved anothey one..>

Simplicity Knows Beauty, And I Think Its Had An Affair With Perfection, And This Poetic Deciet Has Only Given My Eyes a Satisfied Seduction And I'm Intrigued *Simply Genuis* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo