by Hurtingsoul Apr 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The sword shines in the sun |
by Cheshire Kat
Ooooo, nice nice! Wonderfully done, but I don't feel the feeling of war....(sorry!) 5. |
by xxSuicidalxx
Beautiful poem....there are no words to descibe how awesome this poem is...great work ....give it a 10! LOVE IT !!!!!!!! keep up the good work !!!! |
by Blissful
This was brilliant! I loved the language, it described war perfectly. I felt as if I was captured inside your poem and was seeing everything through my own eyes. Well done *5/5* |
by claire
I liked this one a lot - 5/5! =) pls r/r/c one of my newest one thx! |
by Fallen Angel
Gd luv ya chica |