Silent Crowd

by Goth marionette   Apr 28, 2006


I've woken up
as who had some narcotic sup
just nude body in the middle of the street
i didn't know if I am still a human or just some peat?!

I astonished why i am here alone
cars&people around me never cared as if i was just a stupid hone
no one saw me or even heard my moan
the scars ashed me strongly

My blood which i bled rushed powerfully
am i dreaming or i just feel lonely?!
red lights were everywhere
and sadness which i always feel was also over there

My loneliness gonna make me someday go mad
and gonna make see even the angels bad
I cannot wake myself up from what i got yet
I fight to catch the wind but i fell in the bet

With the devils around me and i only try to seek
the way to lead me back home but i feel so weak
I heard far voices;they are angry and sad,they say
just one thing;they repeat it many times"Get up to Pray"

They warn me"you are just in a nightmare"
don't let the chance go,save your soul before
your turn comes like us and no one would help you
change your transient life as much as you can do"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,this was an astonishing poem and I do really know this feeling, the feeling of being alone and you believe that no one is going to save you or care about you when you are lost or in pain. it is exactly the same feeling I have.
    5\5.

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    When surounded by pain,
    Please, don't go insane.
    It's all in the brain,
    It is sin's stain.

    Keep up the great write. I love reading your poems all the time
    Nice write from Poetry Knight

  • 18 years ago

    by Yasmine

    Thank you Shiama for your comment on my last poem. Actually I wrote in a moment of grief and sadness that I thought I almost lost the words and my ability to write...

    by the way, did you read the one before the last? it just expresses what I'm feeling at the moment!

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