Thank you Shiama for your comment on my last poem. Actually I wrote in a moment of grief and sadness that I thought I almost lost the words and my ability to write...

by the way, did you read the one before the last? it just expresses what I'm feeling at the moment!

When surounded by pain,
Please, don't go insane.
It's all in the brain,
It is sin's stain.

Keep up the great write. I love reading your poems all the time
Nice write from Poetry Knight

Wow,this was an astonishing poem and I do really know this feeling, the feeling of being alone and you believe that no one is going to save you or care about you when you are lost or in pain. it is exactly the same feeling I have.
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