One Moment

by Dan Bloom   Apr 28, 2006


I hope this time will be different
A time to be free
just tell me what you want
and I'll be what you want me to be

Just love me
and hold me just as tight as you do
with that beautiful shine in your eyes
And the sweet smell of your perfume

You hold me so closely to you
And i can feel your beating heart
I don't want this moment to end
Please don't ever let us part

But now i am crushed
By the most crucifying word
Goodbye is what i said
And goodbye is what i heard

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theres a part two to this and i wrote this about 4 days ago

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristin

    I thought that was an amazing poem, i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    Great poem, i hope ya troubles are over, it does suck problems, anyway keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    I like this poem! Very depressing, though..

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Ohh i love the last part.
    and i'm not gonna seriously choose death. but i'm glad that if i chose to die, you would kill me =) lol. and i'm sorry you were cheated on T_T you DID NOT deserve it.

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