You had a nice message in this poem....it was nicely thought out and written...beautiful poem...take care and keep smiling always...

Hey! I liked this one! Awesome job! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
*Just Lisa*

This is an ultimate piece, very strongly written with a powerful message. Great job, as I can see that you have alot of talent in you. Keep it up. And thank you for your sweet words on mine. :-)

SO TRUE!!! i absolutely agree with you!!! Everyone's so easily offended these days, and the world is going straight to hell fast. it's sad. i love this poem! beautiful and true...GREAT JOB!!!! And thanks so much for commenting on my poems, it means a lot! again, great job!! 5/5 much love!!!
-Ashley-

This is a great poem! Very deep and true thoughts... Very well written!