Comments : HEart.. OR MinD

  • 18 years ago

    by Olivia

    This is one of my favorite poems ive seen so far on this website! I can relate 100%! WOnderful!
    Keep writing!
    -Olivia

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Haha yeaaaaaaaaaaaaa i love it!!!!! i have felt that way so many times you have no idea like omg dude you just have no idea lol i love your poem!!!!!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    Always listen to your heart, always.
    It tells you what you really want.
    Your mind says let go
    your heart says hold on
    and the memories say to cry
    but your heart tells what you really want, what youll always want
    i love this poem
    keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by elvia

    That was a good poem

  • Ok i pretty much LOVED THIS! i loved the ending how it ended up being your heart and mind fighting! i totally know what you mean by this and your a great writer! keep up the hard work! awesome job!!
    XoOx molly

  • 18 years ago

    by Bree

    Hello there, -hehe- well i loved your poem! not just that one. i usually ignore the little "please read" things but you got lucky! i red that one and loved it so i keep reading and turns out i red all your quotes and poems and LOVED ALL OF THEM! i relate 100 %. i have this friend that completly forgot about me.... sad huh? lol well you did a great job and keep it up. write me sometime. just to stay in thouch. i need someone to share my quotes with. lol basketball_bree5@hotmail.com. o ya and i LUV softball too :) talk to you later maybe. ( hope im not scaring you) lol see ya!

  • 18 years ago

    by blood staind wrist

    Hey this us a good poem keep up the good work 5/5....

    Razors_edge
    p.s check out some of my stuff please

  • 18 years ago

    by Fury

    That is soooo sad, I honestly started to cry when I read that!! It's really good!!! It's excellent!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fadedstar

    That was an amazing poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Philip

    Your poems are great(:

  • 18 years ago

    by death cab cutie

    Wow yeah i felt this way omg i love this poem 5/5 yeah no joke that is one amazing poem!!!!