Black Tears

by nikki   Apr 29, 2006


These tears that you dont see,
Doesn't mean they aren't there,
They are there I just dont show it,
They are my black tears.

Every tear has a color and a flavor,
My tears are black,
They taste blank and alone,
You just don't understand,

I cry black tears,
In the loneliness of my room,
You think I'm strong,
I just don't let you see,

My black tears,
Are something I keep to myself,
I don't let you see that it kills me,
Every time I think of you.

You caused these tears,
These tears of pain and loneliness,
These tears that are blank and tasteless,
You caused these black tears

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  • 16 years ago

    by MizzCici

    WOW...I realy liked this poem i cryblack tears myslf u did a real good job with this poem u putfeelings into it keep writtin,stop by sumtime and leave a comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    I reli liked it.. it had progression and tho it didnt rhyme, it still produced effective, desirable imagery and invoked feelings in the reader (aka me :P)
    short, but straight to the point.. good job
    i just loved ur second stanza.. stood out of the poem..

    keep it up
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Really good! I really liked all of the emotion in it! It was good and it flowed well too!

    Please r/r/c forienger, and rose colored glasses

  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    It is a very sad poem but the way it is written complements it brilliantly it dosen't need to rhyme because it's just about true emotions. A great poem in my view

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