Really good! I really liked all of the emotion in it! It was good and it flowed well too!

Please r/r/c forienger, and rose colored glasses

I reli liked it.. it had progression and tho it didnt rhyme, it still produced effective, desirable imagery and invoked feelings in the reader (aka me :P)
short, but straight to the point.. good job
i just loved ur second stanza.. stood out of the poem..

keep it up
take care
NannO

WOW...I realy liked this poem i cryblack tears myslf u did a real good job with this poem u putfeelings into it keep writtin,stop by sumtime and leave a comment!