Comments : Losing You

  • 18 years ago

    by iicansaveyou.

    I seriously have tears falling from my eyes..this was a.....I can't talk. I'm speechless..I'm adding you to my favorites.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    I love this poem. It is very personal but very easy to relate to.

    I especially enjoyed the part 'I know she still chases you, longing after your heart,
    And I know that she's winning you, slowly each part.'

    I would like to read more by you, this is really good. :)

    ~Scarlett

  • 18 years ago

    by Veja

    Girl , girl , girl , u have mad talent . I gift of expressing yourself so deeply . I luv thispoem and just like the other girl the part where you said 'I know she still chases you, longing after your heart,
    And I know that she's winning you, slowly each part.' i can really relate to that , this poem is somewhat like an exprience which i am goin thru right now . Keep it Up . I addin you to my favorites now. girl