by Jackie Marie
This was my favorite part of the poem: |
by Stabbylou
Another great poem, it's moving. You express your insecurites and sadness so brilliantly. You are a talented writer, keep it up :) |
by Fallen Angel
This poem, for me at least was much better than the last one, the rhyming was much more easy and gave the poem a really nice flow. The ideas and emotions come across really strongly in this poem, great write. Like I said, I try to offer improvements, but really I can't pick any fault in this, brilliant stuff. 5/5 x |