Comments : Own To Find

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    This was my favorite part of the poem:

    Everyone asks me questions
    I can't help but turn away
    All they want to know
    Is if I'm okay

    "I'm fine," I answer quietly
    A million doubts inside my mind
    I cannot let them down one bit
    For them it is their own to find.

    Excellent hunn...* ^^ I like that part because I can REALLY relate to it. I feel that way constantly. Just seems like no one understands.

    5*5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Another great poem, it's moving. You express your insecurites and sadness so brilliantly. You are a talented writer, keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    This poem, for me at least was much better than the last one, the rhyming was much more easy and gave the poem a really nice flow. The ideas and emotions come across really strongly in this poem, great write. Like I said, I try to offer improvements, but really I can't pick any fault in this, brilliant stuff. 5/5 x