You kno i love this, 1. b.c its FRICKING AWESOME, and 2. u read it to me b4 anyone else @ ur house lmao. but u kno i LOVE IT and, yeah, its THE best poem by u, like EVER. lylas
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Whoa, that was interesting i like it! for reals. keep up the good work
leilani

You can feel the emotion through the words, this is a really good poem, i know how you feel, if u ever need to talk im here for you, and if you could comment on some of my poems it would be much appreciated.
love cass xoxo

W0w very deep poem, I loved it

Interesting subject. I never read a poem on it before. It was good.

Great poem, gets people to visualize the flower. I also think it's a tragity to see a flower die. We put it in a vase, to display its beauty and that's what eventually kills it. I actually keep a dead rose in my room, it's about the most poetic thing I own.

I keep on saying this, and I think it's mostly to you, but you could have broken this into stanzas. It makes it more apealing to read. Think about a story you've read, emagine if that was all one big paragraph... Would you still want to read it? Same goes for poetry and stanzas.

I liked this. Freestyle is something I never thought I could do because it takes a lot of work. But there were a bunch of similes and metaphors and it helped me invision your poem more. The only thing I could suggest is probably finding a better title than using the last verse, because it ruins it in a way. Or find a new way to word the ending or extend it.

Other than that GREAT poem.

Yours Truly,
Bryce

Wow- that is one of the best poems i have ever read. brilliant and original idea, and really well written as well!

well done!

lonelynow x x x

Awesome poem! It's a very unique style that I haven't seen. None the less it was a great write! Very Creative!! Keep it up!
-cheers- ^_^

You had a good idea and exicuted it well
the description went along with everything ( mood, symbolism. etc...) nicely
the only critisism i have it that you might want to have a few stanzas instead of one big poem
it would be easier to read and will allow you to have more enphosis on the parts that you feel should stand out and be noticed, thus guiding the reader through your thoughts easier

over all good job!

Some parts of it i liked and some parts could use work. overall it's an alright poem but it's how you did the last few lines that makes me want to move it up to a four along with the fact that the idea and the title are creative. the title caught my eye. thanks so much for your nicely put comments acompenied by a generious rating by the way. i'll give this one a four.

Omg, this was really good. I've never read anything like this. you do write really good stuff. I loved it! 5/5