You can feel the emotion through the words, this is a really good poem, i know how you feel, if u ever need to talk im here for you, and if you could comment on some of my poems it would be much appreciated.
love cass xoxo

Woah this is really gud!! ur a really good writer...
anywayz if u culd coment n vote on my poems id realy appreciate it.. mayb u culd giv me cum pointers??
Thanx!
XXX
**Clare*

WOW!! Excellent poem. At worst I didn't understand it but as I read on I understood. I think you did a very good job on this poem and I liked the last stanza. 5/5

I don't like people that comment on how good sad/depressing poems are.... Because it's not about whether they're good or not, it's whether they show emotion, and clearly this one does.... I hate submitting poems like this because some people may think I'm a tad screwed up.... Hmmm, 5/5