Gifted Lips and Dancing Eyes (Senryu)

by HOLLY ARMER   Apr 29, 2006


Laughter plays softly
upon my gifted lips as
our dancing eyes meet

*A senryu is much like a haiku, but based upon human nature and emotions. It has three unrhymed lines; Consisting of 5, 7, 5 syllables.
Also it is usually written in the present tense.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I simply adore this Ms. Holly, spectacular in that you say so so much in very little words. You continue to be my hero, as always. Love, Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by -annie vandergaag

    That was soo captivating. i once did an essay on shakespeare about how hes remembered 500 years later becuase of his ability to use such few words to describe a character - his personality, mood, morals - and you definitely have the gift to use a few words, but make the meaning powerful. excellent job.
    -annie

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Perfect flow and awesome choice of words... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Kristy took the words outta my mouth! I liked this Senryu its different! i have been liking this style and hopefully sooner or later going to try one of my own!
    nice! I liked!!
    Chels