Kristy took the words outta my mouth! I liked this Senryu its different! i have been liking this style and hopefully sooner or later going to try one of my own!
nice! I liked!!
Chels

Perfect flow and awesome choice of words... :)

That was soo captivating. i once did an essay on shakespeare about how hes remembered 500 years later becuase of his ability to use such few words to describe a character - his personality, mood, morals - and you definitely have the gift to use a few words, but make the meaning powerful. excellent job.
-annie

I simply adore this Ms. Holly, spectacular in that you say so so much in very little words. You continue to be my hero, as always. Love, Tim