You can feel the emotion through the words, this is a really good poem, i know how you feel, if u ever need to talk im here for you, and if you could comment on some of my poems it would be much appreciated.
love cass xoxo

Very dramatic ending pulled it together for me. Seemed to lack much emotion beyond the surface for me...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow. you're writing ability is amazing. this poem expresses so much emotion and it's just amazing. 5/5 and keep it up =)
Paulette

Great poem...very amazing word choice...and just an all together well written poem...
Emma 5/5

This was really sad. Good though. The way you went through each stanza with what you were trying to forget was really good. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

I try to hide my secrets,
But you know they are there
Bleeding from inside my soul...
And suddenly....
I'm scared.

This was my favorite stanza!! Very deep!! Great way to end it!! Really sad but good to!!! Wonderful!! Couldnt change a thing!! 5/5!!

Wow that is so sad... it brought a tear to my eye cause I can relate to this 100%. You really let out your emotions on this and you did a great job on it. I loved it.