Very nice Emma. keep doodling away wiht ur poetry, it's turning out great : )
ttyl, Snoo

Excellent poem, Emma. Written very well and your writing is overflowing with constant emotive language. Well done, and keep it up.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

P.S: Do check out 'Stolen Innocence', a poem very much in favour of the style you write in. Please and thank you =).

Hahaha, sorry if I startled you there. The previous comment had your name in it, so I thought it would have been best for me to use your real name =D.

Much love,
Fallen.

Nice poem but horrible.
otherwise nice