Love's Pure Release (A collaboration write with Sunny)

by Steven Beesley   Apr 29, 2006


[A collaboration write with Sunny]

Love's Pure Release:

If you say it from your heart
it can't be wrong
Say it with true feelings
pure and strong

give the one you love
the most precious gift of all
a chance to see your soul
trusting them to catch you when you fall

Let out what it is that you
have buried deep inside
Do not lock away all your
love like the sea so deep

Hearts grow cold as ice
when pain seeps within
true love shall wither
casting lonesome shadows

Do not let the gloomy phantoms
keep your love locked away
Fight for it as it is part of you
nourish it as a part of your life

When we intertwine as one heart
two souls bonded, completed puzzle
our lives will flourish together
eternal bliss will consume our world

(c)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Superb write you two. So beautifully written. Your words are so wonderfully clamped together.

    Just one thing...

    3rd stanza:
    Let out what is is that you
    --------------^
    I think you mean to say "it"?

    Superb work you two!