Adam Hates Eve

It pierces the night
The screams, the fight
She doesn't know what's happen
With knives, he is laden

Run, run for your life
He is ready with a knife
The look in his eyes
He will remember when your body dies

He follows what is taking place
The hideous smirk upon his face
Run, I say, run!
He is ready for fun

"Why do they hide?
From this person inside?
Is it because I would like to paint?
This house with their blood, sweet saint"

Her screams echo
The musical ring it leaves, is techno
He follows on
The light, off the knife it shone

"Peek-a-boo,
I found you"
Shriek of pain
"And you think I'm insane"

Stab in with punishment
Pull out with fulfilment
Blood seeps all
Her body is going to fall

I know all this
All the pain I do not miss
I warned you to run
From my beastly son

Listen; listen closely
This boy is full of hostility
Murder he has committed
And rape he has submitted

Here he comes once more
To make you dead, for sure
You might as well scream
This isn't a bad dream

He's going to hurt you
He's going to make your body two
Hope you enjoy agony
This is a lively tragedy

"How you shudder softly
As I breathe down your neck slowly
You should have run...
You should have run"

"But oh no
You did not listen, so
Right here your going to die
Here where your soul shall fly"

"You're going to feel pain
You're going to feel my shame
The blade is going to finish
This sacrifice dish"

The blade slices
And artfully dices
Screams are heard
"You still do not learn"

Go ahead and screech
No use to beseech
I told you to run, I warned you to leave
The dawning of time, Adam hates Eve

Please comment on this poem, so I can see if I need to improve my writing skills. Thanks