That's amazing, brilliant ryming! I loved it, especialy how you built the tension within the poem, that was great! Keep up the great work! Keep writing x]] Check out my poems please x]] Thanks. Lucy x]]

I liked it... Sort of creepy ^^' But hey.. Good job! Maybe a 5 would be cool ^_~

Fish.... that was outstanding.

That is so scary dom. and i can't believe yu wrote that. u ahve major talent.
love willow xxoo