Nice job. I like the way you started it off. Nice choice of words. Then it followed through toward the end. Nice. 5/5
-Vino

Very good for any christian contemplating suicide. I know if I had read this i would throw that knife way away from me and think about it. What a great way to end it to. Did not expect the part about hell , very nice. I don't know. I'm really speechless about this one. I'm putting you on my favs. 5/5

Great poem
Yours truly,
Bryce

The ending is quite unexpected. The suspense is carried all the way through. The ending is brilliant. It is one of the best scuicide poems i have read.
imi

Woh! Awesome poem! It was a really great! I really liked it ! 10/10!
-CHEERS- ^_^

Wow....
pretty amazing, if i say so myself. i enjoyed every bit of it.
5/5
Lauren

Wow! no wonder you're proud! this is one of the best poems i have read in a long time!

well done!!

lonelynow x x x x

I liked it. There was something very touching and meaningful about it. Very well done.
~Fallen

Totally agree with the comments here, this is a really great poem and is followed through nicely, glad i stumbled across it! Keep Writing!

xxxx

Grrt job!!!!!! i loved the way the weapons u were going to use dissapeared! awesome plot carried out soooooo well...i can believe how grrt this is....i loved the ending and i commend u for making reading it rlly worth my time!
love ya lots,
sore

Aww i love this poem!!! WONDERFUL WRITE keep up the good work! and remember im here if u need any one any time!
ashley

Omg i love this poem
its amazingly wrriten!
i love long rhyming poems =]
thaks you also for mycomment youmade me smile and feel a lot better today=] so thank you=]
your going on myfaves =]
thanks again
love
alice
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Oh, i loved this poem. your an awesome writer and so great at explaing to the reader! thanks for the comment on my poem!
xoOx molly

I toally agree with what every1 else is saying.. out of all teh suicide poems ive read this is the absolutel best... the rest are deep and end with like bloody stuff but this is really different.. amazing... 10/10

I toally agree with what every1 else is saying.. out of all teh suicide poems ive read this is the absolutel best... the rest are deep and end with like bloody stuff but this is really different.. amazing... 10/10

Woah.great poem. i loved it! thanks for commenting on mine.

Hey this is a great poem! Its like a message to all of the emo people. I can be emo to so im not sayin nothing about emo people, but anyways i use to be really emo and poems like this helped me get over it bcuz i know if i ever killed myself it would just make things worse. Great poem!!! Keep up the great work!
Sheena

That was such an awesome poem!!!

Wow..This poem is really good!..I really enjoyed reading it. Your very talented. By the way thanks for the comments on my poems I appreciate them. Keep up writting because your good at it. Lotz Of Love-xox.

Great poem!! It makes u think twice about sucide...and wat cums after u leave this hell ---> how u will b in the hell for eternity - Great poem 5/5

Wow this is really good.