Comments : This One's for the Pain (revised)

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    You were so right, what a brilliant poem, there is something in it we all can relate to some how.....Just amazing and I think ahe will be honered to know that you posted this again, to let every one know how good it is =0) Amazing hunni...

    Much Love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    So wise..wow.. you're right this is truly universal, and the fact that other people share the strife doesnt necessarily comfort me, but at least we know we're not alone i guess ay?
    miss u hun
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Loved it loved it loved it, Great topic!

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    This one actually made me get a little teary eyed. Its so true - and almost everyone can relate to. I know a few in there I feel are inside me. But, it was an excellent poem. The stanzas were great and the overall construction was brillant. You and your friend did an great job percieving the message!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Wow, this was awesome! So beautifully written! It is full of heart and real problems that many go through.

    Much love!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This one is for anyone,
    who's every felt misunderstood and alone.
    They cry at night when no one can hear,
    deciding to suffer depression on their own.
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    I loved that stanza. This poem was so great. Honestly one of the best I have read lately. Every emotion you expressed in this was very true. And I'm sure so many people could relate to this. I can alot. It was great hun. Keep up the fantastic work!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 13 years ago

    by momopixie18

    I almost don't want to stop reading this, because when you read it you feel.. understood. i very much like it. so relatable on many levels, with one poem you can touch the heart of so many