Interesting catchy cool =D
lol

This is very good, it's a great attempt at a country song- you should definitely write another. I'm very impressed by your use of language, your words are captivating. I honestly can't pick fault, well done.

That was fabulous!!!
good job
5/5

Im not that big of a country fan but this is awesome again ur a great poet you should become a song writer or a famous poet cuz hunny u could make it *lol* great job 5/5