Thats really sweet! really nice flow, good job! keep up the work, and dont let anyone tell you you cant change the world!

That was so inspirational
I really liked it

Sondos

"I'm not going to save the world,
I'm going to change it!"

Beauty of a poem very inspirational. Not so sure why this is a love poem but it was a pleasure to read. If this is based on your own experience I think hope you hold on to that dream and continue to persue it. All the best with your writing.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow,this piece of writing was very inspirational. the last lines were amazing. always hold on you your hopes and dreams. I dont think this should be under 'love'. Other than that it was a really good write. it was different from what i read but i loved it!

Amazing flow and use of words and excellent concept :) and that for a 14-year old lol anyways i loved it :) i give it a 5/5

~StefQ

Incredibly inspirational and thoughtful poem, interesting the way you incorporated the story, An intelligient and inspiring piece

"I'm not going to save the world,
I'm going to change it!"

If only we all thought like this..

"If I can not touch everyone,

Cannot should be one word. Also, the 5th stanza lost the flow a little with shorter lines . . .

However, awesome poem - I'm sure loads of people on this site could relate.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow the last two lines were a powerful message, noone can save the World as such...but everyone can change it in their own special way :)
I thought the whole poem was excellent, well thought out and well set out
Great stuff :)

Excellent poem. Definatly going to be a writter! no doubt.

The flow was strong and it was very inspirational, without being cheesy a few very good lines in their that really stand out well done!

Wow ! awesome poem very VERY nice. :] hahah it really inspires me to write more poems

This is really good the flow was perfect & the rhyme scheme worked well. I really like the meaning behind it as well as everything else. Great job on this! 5/5*

Hey, all the best forever, just dont let that dream fade away, u really got the talent for sure
5/5

take care

Wow you're wicked good. Thanx for the comment on mine by the way but damn! You have a lot of comments like u need mine, but you're really good keep it up!

WoW ThAt WaS PrETtY DeEp I LoVeD It ...i know it gave me goose-bumps too lol

Loved it!!! Wouldnt change a thing!!! Great job!! 5/5!! Thanks for entering my contest!!!

Wow.. that was inspriational! i loved itt! it was amazing! keep up the excellent work, and we will all keep coming back! :)
jessy

Gr8 poem...makes u think. lovd it..5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Really really love this poem a lot...there is something different about this poem compared to tohers that I have read o the site...loved it....and I noticed you entered it in a comp as well hehe....nice job.

This is awesome! i REALLY love the ending! wow! great job!
Xoox molly